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I dream to be remembered,
Recalled for the beauty of my soul bonded into the pages.
Infused into the worded ink that is my lifeblood.
I aspire for my emotions wrapped between the covers to be unravelled by curious minds.
To share with them the world I had conceived, beckoning adventure and igniting romance.
I strive for the writer's victory of making a story resonate in people's hearts.
Hoping that my words will echo through the world, changing people, comforting lives.
One day I hope, when I'm dead and gone,
a piece of me will be sitting on the shelves of my beloved kindred spirits,
waiting to be opened again, like a reunion between old friends,
where we shall reminisce of those vibrant moments where we both smiled and cried.
Tattered or new, patiently waiting to be discovered or found once again.
And forever shall I remain in this world, remembered for what I have done,
through the actions of the characters that shall shine on without me.
Immortalized.
So after detaching myself for a few weeks from poetry I can finally use free verse again. Whoop! Although I admit this may not be my best, I just wanted to get my healthy dose of writing out of my system. Good practice and all that. And as we all know, I love to share in the hopes someone can point out if it can be any better. Granted, it's shorter than my usual thing, but hey, it's a good change.
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TwinSocks Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh and i forgot to mention that from this poem of yours i liked this the most;
"I strive for the writer's victory of making a story resonate in people's hearts.
Hoping that my words will echo through the world, changing people, comforting lives."

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UndiscoveredMuse Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Student Writer
Why thank you. You're too kind.
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TwinSocks Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
you're welcome~ no, i'm not~ xD
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TwinSocks Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I like how you describe what you're aiming for~
It's like the ambitions of any writer i'd say~ 
and the ending is pretty powerful~ ^^
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RVFanatic1 Featured By Owner Dec 4, 2013
Tt's really nice. it's an inspiring piece of work that speaks of the dreams of all people. Everyone wants to leave their mark on the world and not be forgotten. This is a good little poem that illiterates that.
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UndiscoveredMuse Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Student Writer
thank you :D
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RVFanatic1 Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013
anytime :). i'm trying to write a story with a friend of mine that gets known. my dream is to have it become a lot more then just an internet fic.
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UndiscoveredMuse Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Student Writer
I know the feeling. Good luck with it. With enough grit you won't fail.
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RVFanatic1 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013
thanks for the support. it would be awesome if this did become more. it would be all thanks to you all, and i would make sure you guys wouldn't be forgotten :)
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obsidianhart Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2013  Student Writer
WOW! And this is the herald of every writer who aspires and dreams to be remembered for all time. You captured the emotion of a writer's soul very well (of course you would...you are a writer!) We live on in the pages that we write, in the lives that we inspire and impact, in the characters we infuse with ourselves, our identities. Writing is a skill, a craft; many practice it...but only a few will ever be immortalized...and that is the desire, the goal, the ambition of every serious writer, isn't it? And you captured that desire and that ambition HERE in this synopsis.
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